One day there lived a mage called josh he was a mage he had powers and wands to fight for his kingdom.One day he made a the power off magic and created the power of mind control that he put the power on to the wand so anyone that he points the wand at will be controlled. By what he's says what to do. And it could change the world and he had the ability to give it to the king of London and win all the battles that he had won and and lost so one day the mage tested the wand and what he said to the king he would do and to stop the power stop and the wand will stop doing what it is doing one day king of Scotland had planed to ATTACK London so when Scotland started ATTACKING London the mage got his wands out so he tried his new power mind control he pointed it a knight he said kill kill kill Scotland and used the healing power that he gave to the archer to point at the knight all the wands had infinite range so for that knight had made London win the battle so they kept the knight
prisoner for other ATTACKS. So when Scotland declared war on London all the other countries help Scotland London kept wining and wining until Josh the mage started using the fire wand so he brunt a load of battlefield and used his lava wand to make a lava moat. When Scotland had made a new weapon call the wall smasher it could go through lava and water without rusting it was made of stainless steel and smash things to make tunnels and smash holes in the walls when Scotland tried the new machine and in battle when they tried the started smashing the walls and got through 2 metres and 6 centimetres. the English suffered a heavy castle beating it took them 2 months to fix the castle the English tried repairing the castle when a battle was going on Josh was angry cause Scotland had damaged his keep and made a wand that could build stuff and repair it even that the war was coming to a end he still was repairing the castle still just in case if a cold war broke out and if they ATTACK them
and a 2 war broke out people new that the war was coming to a end one day all the king went to London and signd a treaty and the war came to a end. THE END
I don't think I'd want to see that lava wand in action! It sounds like it could do some serious damage! It's great to read your narrative Josh. Please go through and check that it makes sense and has enough punctuation. And no mind control wands allowed in the classroom!
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